Yeah I think Mabel as Raoul would work a lot better (as much as I like Wendip too, Mabel in the role is a lot more meaningful I think. And the long-lost sibling thing makes it more interesting)
And holy crap that’s so cool about the glowing eye thing! I haven’t been able to finish the novel so I didn’t know that. I’d love to draw some designs for this. Phantom/Erik Bill would look so cool.
I’m trying to think of if he would just have scars on his face of if he’d have something else going on? Like some black hole eldritch void on his face to go with the fact that he’s an inter-dimensional demon?